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*I have not seen your other works, so please do not be offended*
Well, hello there!
While scrolling through critiquable, this caught my eye(s). <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Good job!
So, when I critique, I tend to be harsh (hence the non-exisistent 5/5 stars) so if you don't like it, don't put this up please. :3
Below I will list my likes/dislikes and suggestions/reccomendations <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
-The technique is FANTABULOUS! I love the different shading and coloring :> it's bootiful.
-I'd reccomend adding an outline to his visible ears... the edges don't look smooth, which I don't like
-THE HAIR IS SO COOL! How do you do it? I can't even add good shading to mine <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=" (Sad)"/>
-The eyes look so cool! Determined Link!
-The blending on the neck seems to be rough. Maybe blend it more, or add a different tool of shading?
-The grey area should have at least SOME shading. It's the only plain area >.>
-I love how the green shading is so vibrant! Cool! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
-... Again, those eyes are what catches my attention!!!!!!! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Wow. This is actually really good, for a SKETCH. A SKETCH?! DreamMakerx, this ain't even close to a SKETCH! LOOK AT DAT FACE!?! I can't even make mine like that!
So obviously, congrats. Not many willl agree with me, but I critique very strictly, so getting this much love is a good sign.

Impact: The eyes are what catches my attention. End of story.
Technique: It's not a perfect technique, so do a few more of these! Maybe spend a tad bit more time on these, and then maybe a 4.5 star rating <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
Originality: I'm not sure if you used a reference, so 3/5 is fair in my opinion. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
Oh, and how I say originality, is if no reference is used and if it's an idea I'VE never seen before.
Vision: Visuality is really good! The only problems I see, are the neck, the grey undershirt area(?), and the ears. They should be fixed in a way. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

So yeah.... good job!